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There are many people who give advice and
guide to children for their future. Children were received advice that you can
achieve anything if you try hard and do your best. In my opinion, I think this
message can give them advantage or disadvantage depends on their thinking and
this essay I will give advantages and disadvantage of this statement.
Most of people give this message to
children, because they think it is good for children and gives motivation for
their life. I was also one of the children who heard this message when I was
young. At that time, I believe that I can get whatever I want if I do my best
and give my effort to studying. Therefore, I try my best and have proud that I
will achieve what I want in the future, because I try hard. Many children
receive motivation and power by this advice.
Although it gives me motivation, I become
realistic person. There are many people, troubles, and reasons that I could get
what I want. Such as money, knowledge, talent etc., most of children blocked
their future because of theses reason. For me, I tried to do my best because I
believe that advice, however, I was frustrated in the reality as I grow up.
Like me, people can discourage by this advice.
This advice offer motivation to children try hard
for achieve something that they want, when they were young and the time that
they do not know the reality. As children getting older, they will realize the
reality and this advice was for children. To the conclusion, I believe this
advice is not good for children in the long run. As I experienced.
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