Some people believe that houses should be built in the same style as other houses in the area, while others believe people should be allowed by the council to build houses in any style they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since each person has have diverse tastes in terms of design, we have been building various a variety of style of buildings and houses with different demands, with all credit due to the huge developement of architecture industry. This thus results to interesting house designs that have its uniqueness. However, some Some people assert that houses in certain places should look similar but others say that we do not need to follow its limited rules. In this essay, I will identify both viewpoints and offer my persective on this matter.
Decidedly, there are valid points about the shared styles of design. First and foremost, a conceptual design can present those areas' traditions and identities as well as the fact that it looks exotic and also reflect cities' color. Also it promotes to gather visitors from other cities and countries. Moreover, when we provide a provides common style of architecture, it helps us to understand their customs and history. Moreover, when it looks like a set, this also offers the thoughts that the towns are owning their special unity.
However, When when it comes to planned styles' drawbacks, several negative ideas also exists. Initially, we have a right to show our own styles and opinions onto appearance of housing. Besides this, If if the authorities prevent people to construct houses not to build with their personal ideas, it will also cause slow development of archiceture fields. Furthermore, variety design various designs also mirrors house owners' personality and a way of living. Therefore, people argue that the government should not force citizens to establish identical buidings.
To sum up, if each town has their own design systems, this could lead travelers' attention with joy. However, when various styles are allowed, it will acclerate to bring new insights and creativity in these this fields.
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