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Biotechnology development caused a longer
life spans in the world. It is a common belief that the older people are not
useful to the society’s economy. However, I firmly believe that the elder
people also can help the society by sharing their enough time and experiences
with the young people.
First of all, the elder people’s group have
more time than other age groups. In Korea, people usually retired after the age
of sixty-five. However, this age is not recognized as the old people. They are
able to spend their time more productively in their town. For example, there
are so many dual-income families, so most of their kids spend time alone. Given
the older residents' nurture experience, they can take care of other neighbor’s
children and it would be helpful to the dual-income family because they do not
have to concern about their children.
On top of that, the elderly group can be a
good advisor. The older residents can give an advice to some of the specific
major that they spent most of their time. A modern society has better
technology and skills than the past but the past skills and experience are also
crucial to the society. For example, in the past, people focus on the
fundamental conception than today because of the lack of the skills. If older
people can share their experiences with the youthful group, it would be helpful
to improve modern society’s competitiveness.
In summary, elder residents are able to
lead a better society by sharing their know-how with the society members. For
these reasons, I thinks the older residents not only can make the society
benefit but also lead the society.
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People 동의어로 residents,
group, citizens 전부 가능할까요??
Older는 동의어가 그래도 생각나는데, young 동의어가 생각나는게 youthful하나라 더 제한적이었습니다. |