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Writing 2/07/2020
문제: Some students decide early in life to
pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is
better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular
subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that learning special
skills in high school are more beneficial than learning the regular subjects. I
understand that learning special skills has positive impact on further
profession preparing student to be more equipped with better skills, however, I
do think that learning regular subjects is more crucial.
Pursuing regular education is important considering
the possible shift in the career later life. For example, many teenage baseball
players undergo frustration when they have permanent injury. Only targeting one career and not having a backup plan by learning other subjects can be
frustrating when finding a new job in the future with the limited choice of the job
opportunity. In this regard taking the regular course is helpful widening the
choice by being introduced to many subjects which enable teenagers to notice which
subject they are talented and interested in.
Secondly learning the regular subject has
social benefits. Knowing information about various subjects such as math,
history and Spanish gives more chance for people to engage in the conversation
which helps to make new friends. Furthermore, research shows that having various
knowledge in different subjects has a significant impact on parent and children’s
affection level. By being able to answer the general questions and helping school
works of their children, parents formed a deeper connection with the children and
children reported increased trust to their parents.
In conclusion, focusing on one subject for
the future occupation pose benefits in future professions such as
professionality. Nevertheless, considering the uncertainty of the future such
as shifting career and its social benefits, pursuing the regular course is more
beneficial.