A
person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and
material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust,
no longer seem important.
To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and
include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
As time goes by, it is obvious that, the
value of people tends to be judged depending on their wealth and, social status. Their
personalities such as kindness, faith, seem to be less important compared to
past. In this essay, I will discuss about this situation. (이전에 말씀드렸듯이 이 습관은 반드시 고쳐주셔야 합니다. 실제 입장을 밝혀주세요!)
There is no doubt that when we evaluate
someone, people tend to look at their background first rather than their
personality. Of course, it depends on the situation, but mostly in our society, we
care about someone’s background first. The reasons are because, first First of all, it is hard to assess other’s
personality. It is because not only anyone can hide their thoughts or mind but
also old fashioned values (honor, kindness, trust, etc.) are subjective. Therefore,
people assess them differently. On the other hand, today’s value (social
status, wealth, etc.) have an objective indicator. We can expect that what
their material possessions are, so it is easy find it compared to subjective
ones.
However, even though it is difficult to value
a person, we should not judge someone only by their objective materials. When we
value someone, we have to look in various ways. Even though we know they have
done enough to reach a high social status, their personalities are also
important in their values. For example, if someone have both high social status
and amount of money but have a bad personality, the value of he or she his or her value will be
low. Therefore, in these reasons, a majority of people still look at their personality
when they value a person.
To conclude, from a realistic point of
view, I agree to a certain extent that we tend to look at their backgrounds
first. However, we have to keep in mind that it can be hasty to judge someone
only by material possessions.
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아이디어가 떠오르지 않아 말도 안되는 소리한 것 같네요,,,,ㅎ
총평; (6/7/7/6) 6.5
이전에 말씀드린
1. 서론을 초록색과 같이 쓰지 않기 (명확한 입장을 제시하기)
2. 부분동의는 웬만하면 하지 않기 (진짜 비추입니다. 논제 운이 나쁘면 진짜 큰일날 수 있어요.)
는 꼭 체크해주세요! 다행히도 오늘(18일)에 올려주신 글을 이러한 문제가 해결되었네요. 앞으로도 18일에 올려주신 것처럼만 쓰시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)