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Learning languages from natural circumstance hasis as many benefits as studying through computer. When studying languages via computer, people cannot often correctly understand what the meaning is correctly. First and foremost, when people traveling abroad will utilize a translator to communicate with locals, there may be some words that mean name-calling in translator. It is difficult to distinguish homonyms from being the same pronounce words that are different meanings. At that time, people will probably find out learning language via computer is not always correctly. Secondly, children will not only be able to figure out what to improve speaking,writing,listening (여기는 띄어쓰기 해주셔야 합니다.) and reading but also recognize the information that is based on experience if they study with authors. For instance, a girl who wants to be an author can ask them how to write accurately without mistakes. Then the famous authors might provide some information in terms of their experience to her. It might be great opportunity for her to be a wonderful author. On the other hand, a computer is not capable of furnishing the information that is related to experience due to not having data regarding experience. So for these reasons, studying languages with people is much better than understanding it via computer.
Learning languages from natural circumstance has
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