You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.
Write a letter to the council. In your letter
Say how you heard about the plan
Explain how you feel about it
Ask for more information about it
Dear Sir or Madam council,
I am writing to you in regards to the construction of building a shopping center near my house that I have read in the local newspaper. It will build a shopping center near my house.
I am a resident of Charlton Blvd that I have been living in for 3 years and it is a pretty quiet place. I was quite surprised when I read the local newspaper because I have never considered that building big facilities would be built in the area which I live in, because there are only houses which I lived in as well as there are only houses. I am also concerned about loud construction and traffic that will cause inconvenient environments such as quality of sleep and traffic congestion.
Furthermore, I would like to know how construction will proceed such as the starting date, period of construction and traffic congestion. I hope you already know that this place has been having serious traffic jams, and I would like to ask you how to not increase traffic problems during construction. You as well as you should avoid time of to construction between at 10pm to 10 am because my most of my neighbors have young children that they have to go to the school and should take a sleep properly. I await your further information of construction.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerity,
Sohee Lim
소요시간 40분
목표점수 6.5
시험날짜 11월 초
총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
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