Major countries nowadays face traffic problems. Describe the situation in your country and discuss possible ways to overcome it.
Do you strongly believe that there is a lot of traffic problems on our society? There has been a controversial issue over whether or not how to solve this problem. Not only do some people claim that most of them are facing the circumstances with a huge problem on using public transportation, but also they point out that commuters and others are concentrated on the specific time to go to work. In my opinion, I would firmly argue that it must be provided an efficient and safe way to fix this situation.
To begin with, it is not strange to say that a majority of people in my country uses the public transportation because of low price to use and easy to access. Because of this influence, during rush hour, all of the buses and trains are fulled with workers to get to work and students to go to their school. Some of workers drive to work as this situation. Due to advances in technology of cars, however, the users of the vehicles are going to upward dramatically that is why car incidents on the roads come up with a lot. Furthermore, this happening is not simple and straightforward problems anymore on our community.
Consequently, our proposals are accepting on this big social problem. First of all, by extending the number of roads which are used with a lot of people, they are able to acquire some benefits which are decreasing waste of time on roads and concentration on their work. In addition, according to a recent survey, it is helpful to use ‘car pool’ system which is drive to work with their coworkers for easing traffic jam. Nowadays, expanding timetable of buses and trains have implemented for our traffic problems.
In short, both opponents and proponents have debated over this disputable issue and both sides seem to have good reasons to support their arguments. Nevertheless, from understanding out social problems about traffic, I would be confident that people and our society will benefit from accepting this occasions and applying these efficient solutions.
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