The floor plans illustrate the improvement of a university’s sports centre between now and the future.
Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a small-scale space to a largely expanded area.
In the present, the university sports centre has two outdoor courts, in the west and the east. The 25m pool with a gym and changing room are placed in between the two outdoor courts. However, in the future, the west side of the outdoor court will be replaced by a leisure pool with a changing room in the corner. A small sports shop will be established next to the changing room in the southwest of the map. The 25m pool will be going to remain at the same spot as the present, while the gym would be almost doubled in length but the gym will be enlarging almost double. The sports hall will be a replacement for the east side of the outdoor court at the present. In addition, there will be two dance studios right next to the gym and the sports hall in the future. Next to the changing room, which will be in the east corner, the a cafe will be built the right next to the reception in the centre of the map.
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