▶ Your Answer : The pie graph given explains the proportion of six kinds of manual and/or non-manual jobs in Great Britain by sex in the year of 1992 that are craft or similar, general labourers, other manual, managerial and professional, clerical or related and other non-manual. In general, there are more female workers are more in non-manual jobs than Male, while male employees shows the opposite tendency. To be specific, in terms of female employment proportion, among 69% of total non-manual jobs, clerical or related jobs took 31% followed by 29% of managerial and professional jobs and 9% of other and non-manual jobs. <(여성의 manual jobs에 대한 정보 summarize 해주셔서 전달을 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다)
With regards to male occupation proportion, among 52% of manual jobs, other manual, craft or similar and general labourers kept 26%, 24% and 2% figure in sequence, while non-manual jobs total percentage showed 48%, composed by 36% of managerial and professional, 6% of clerical or related and other non-manual jobs respectively.
In conclusion, the critical factors that make the difference between manual and non-manual jobs among sex are, the craft or similar jobs which show 3% in female sector and 24% in male sector and the clerical or related jobs that is 31% in the female part and 6% in the male part. The remaining other four kinds of occupations are showing small gap less than 7%.
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