Question: In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school.
Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages?
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Some people might say there are more advantages of teenagers getting part-time jobs. However, there is a more persuasive argument that the disadvantages of that outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, teenagers can experience how to manage their income from part-time job. It can establish their consuming habits and help their future wealth to become stable. In addition, they can learn in advance how to act and respond when they meet new, older people. Especially thanks to this advantage, the personality can be changed positively. In fact, many introvert teenagers became extrovert and active after they started doing part-time job and continually respond to a lot of customers.
Nevertheless, teenagers cannot focus on studying if they get part-time jobs. Most of the teenagers are students, and their major task is academic learning. They should prepare for their future by strengthening their academic base. Teenagers are required to have some academic knowledge whatever the future job they want is. For example, in Korea, many companies employ the large number of people who have at least bachelor's degree. Not only officers but also many artists study a lot of art theories and art history. Thus teenagers should concentrate on studying according to what they want to do in the future.
To sum up, there are more disadvantages than advantages of teenagers getting part-time jobs for preparing their future by improving their academic base.
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