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It is a common belief that buying agricultural products from other countries has a positive results. However, there is a more persuasive argument that using domestic goods is better for our local industry and it is fresh as well.
On the one hand, purchasing agricultural products which are produced from other countries has some positive outcome. By importing goods, we are able to experience diverse kinds of fruit and vegetables easily. There are some agricultural groceries that we cannot cultivate in our country because of the environment. For example, we had not experienced bananas before those were imported in Korea. Importing allows people to enjoy various fruit and vegetables which could not attached before.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that consuming local products is preferable to improve and maintain our local industry. It is much more fresh to buy local goods in our country. On top of that, if we spend imported goods instead of our agricultural products, there would be some negative effects on our domestic industry. Due to buying imported goods, the price of products from our country would be decreased to compete with imports. By plummeting the price, we could not protect our farm industry, and also our local system would have been destroyed. For instance, since the corns from the United States of America which are cheaper than domestic corns, the competitiveness of corns from our country was decreased.
To sum up, while it is apparent that we can taste various groceries such as fruit and vegetables by importing agricultural products from other countries, it is undeniable that buying domestic products is better to maintain our local system.
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