문제:The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
캠브리지 10권 task1 입니다 첨부파일이 올라가지 않아 링크 첨부합니다 바쁘신데 불편하게 해드려서 정말 죄송합니다
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The first pie chart illustrates how energy is consumed in an typical Australian household. the The second chart give informations about the carbon dioxide gas emissions, which examine result from energy use.
Overall, it is clear that Australian households used the most energy to heating and water heating. and Meanwhile, the highest greenhouse gas emissions is water heating.
Looking at the first chat closely, one can see that Australians used nearly half of the total energy for heating, at 42 percent are consumed heating nearly half percent. the The water heating went up over the half of 50 percent. and Also other appliances takes 15%, while the rates of but addition refrigeration, lighting, cool, which is are under 15 percent.
In the second chart, addition, you can see a second chart. this illustrate shows How Australian emit household carbon dioxide. the water heating and other appliances took over 30 percent respectively. the The rate of refrigeration is 14%, where under 15 percent. however the rate of heating percent are 15 percent, which means this two of gas emissions gap only 1 percent points (여기에 대해서는 일단 링크를 넣어드리긴 할 건데, 지금 당장은 그냥 읽고 아 그런가보다~만 하고 넘기세요. 지금 당장은 task1에서 아예 손 떼는 게 맞습니다.). lastly the cooling and lighting went up 11%
총평: 퍼센트포인트와 관련해서는 밑의 링크를 읽어주시면 되겠지만, 일단은 읽어만 두시고 나중에 task1을 다시 공부할 때 참고해주세요! 지금 제가 바꿔드린 내용도 우선은 '아 그런가보다' 하고 넘기시고, 대신 문법+task2 에 집중해주시면 됩니다.
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