▶ Your Answer : The graph below gives us an information on the internet usage types of people in the UK in the year of 2007 and 2009. In general, we can observe from the chart that a growing number of people in the UK are using internet.
Compared to 2007, in 2009, except the percentages on books and learning, all the other given purposes showed an increase.
To be specific, more than half of internet users use internet for shopping in 2009 which was only slightly above 40% in 2007. Particularly, In terms of TV, the percentage was almost doubled in 2 years reaching nearly 20% figure. The other purposes like banking, chatting and video games were also experienced increases in its figures by 10%, 3% and 5% respectively.
However, internet use for books and learning were decreased. Both of their figures were not over 30% in the year of 2009. Especially for books, which took up the second largest portion of internet use in 2007 with only a 5% gap to the top purpose. failed to catch up shopping with a widened gap that is more than 20% in 2009
In conclusion, the proportion of people in the UK who uses the internet has increased between 2007 and 2009 due to leisure and practical purposes while the educational function of the internet was gradually shrunk. shrinked
Score: 7 Comment: 잘 전달해주셨습니다. 내용 정리를 조금 더 해주시고 2007년도의 data도 조금 더 전달을 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |