Present a written argument or case to an
educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led
to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and
markets. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this
example of globalization?
As the world becomes global, it is true
that a variety of exotic products are imported from abroad. With regards to this,
there are has pros and cons. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and
disadvantages of this situation.
First of all, as technology advances. We can
get other, we can gain (asdflsa님 실력이면 이정도는 맞춰주셔야 합니다.) countries’ products easily and there is no doubt that there are many benefits
with that. Firstly, since trade becomes active, some countries can make a
profit so it It can be helpful to their economy. Secondly, we can make up for our
country’s shortcomings by buying exotic technology or products. For example, if
we have a lack of technology for mobile phone, we can import from the countries
which have an excellent semiconductor for the cell phone. It can be beneficial benefit not
only in technology, but also in food industry. We can try various foods that
cannot be harvested in our country.
However, the introduction of exotic
products into local shops can give a bad effect on people who own a local shop.
If the quality of exotic product is better than local’s, local products will fall
behind in the competition and small business owners will be damaged a lot. Consequently,
economy of local market will be decreased. Not only this, we cannot exclude the fact that our products are affected by exotic products. To meet the customer’s
demand, not only local products may have to be changed, but also we may lose our
culture’s identity.
To conclude, importing new international products have both pros and cons. From a local business’s point of view, it will bring an influence on local market. On the other hand, it can be a great chance to increase economy for the countries which possess useful resources.
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