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Family Picnics
The
City Manager is surveying the opinion of the community about family picnics
held in public parks. On the one hand, public parks are created for people to
enjoy nature. On the other hand, large family gatherings can be noisy and
occupy a lot of park space. The City Manager has asked you to complete an
opinion survey.
Choose
the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons
for your choice. Write about 150-200 words.
▉Option
A: Family picnics should not be allowed in public parks.
▉Option
B: Family picnics should be allowed in parks.
I agree that large family gatherings could bother other visitors
in public parks. However, I do not think that big gatherings should be banned
in public parks. There are a couple of reasons why I think so.
One reason is that public parks are designed for outdoor
activities of citizens. Unless visitors’ activities harm other people or parks,
all activities should be allowed. A family picnic itself is not an activity to
bother other people, so it defeats the purpose of public parks to ban all
family picnics in the parks.
The other reason is that there are other democratic ways to
resolve this issue. It is too forceful to ban family gatherings in public
parks because few people make disturbances. For example, the City government could
promote a campaign to request people not to disturb other people too much.
Also, parks could designate some areas for large family gatherings. Then people
who want to enjoy some quiet time in nature could avoid the designated areas.
With the aforementioned reasons, I do not agree that the
City government should prohibit family picnics in public parks.