You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, environment problems is the one of the most serious threats on the earth (여기는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.). Some people say that environmental pollution can only be tackled by governments and large campanies, not by individuals in society. i I strongly disagree with this idea.
Some people say that serious problems such as environment problem must be tackled by government and big companies. One of the reasons why is that environment issue is a huge size problem that normal people cannot handle with. Thus government should implement law that related to improve environment or make people are encouraged by environmental campaigns. Moreover, waste of plastics or vinyls are the one of the most factors that ruin the earth. Therefore, big companies should produce more eco-friendly products and try to make less waste during making products. (여기는 개인을 강조하는 또다른 내용으로 채워주시면 됩니다. 이에 대해서도 밑에서 말씀드릴게요.)
However, I believe that individuals can make a great change in environmental problems. First and foremost, accumulating power of individuals can bring bigger effects are making more effects on the environment compared to rather than any laws or campaigns. Thus, if each person on society try to make less waste and use eco- friendly products, it can lead to alleviate air pollution or global warming.
In conclusion, governments and large companies also can make a change, however, I i firmly believe that power of individuals is are more powerful and can make an effect on reducing environmental issues such as air pollution or global warming by not using conduct do not use un-eco-friendly products.
걸린시간:40분,목표점수:6.5
총평: (5/6/6/6) 6.0
본론1에서 문제가 되는 사항은 매우 중요합니다. 비법노트게시판 4페이지에 가시면 후라이드 vs 양념 이론이라는 제목의 글이 있어요. 그걸 꼭 정독해주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)
오늘은 'Earth' 의 대소문자 관해서 다뤄볼 겁니다.
Earth 는 고유명사가 될 수도, 보통명사가 될 수도 있습니다. 이때, 경우에 따라 전자는 대문자 시작, 후자는 소문자 시작해주셔야하고요.
Earth 가 태양계의 세 번째 행성인 '지구' 를 의미할 때에는 대문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 가령, Looking at our planet Earth from outer space was an unforgettable experience. 라는 문장에서는 지구라는 의미로 작성되었으므로 대문자로 시작하는 것이죠.
반면 대지, 땅에 대해서 얘기할 때에는 소문자 시작입니다. 예를 들어, By digging the earth for about an hour, we were finally able to find the treasure. 라는 문장에서는 땅이라는 의미로 쓰였기 때문에 소문자 시작인 것이죠.
이 글을 읽은 우리 학생 여러분들께서는 앞으로 이와 관련해서 틀리는 일이 없도록 주의해주세요 :)