The bar chart illustrates the export profits of one country in five categories between 2015 and 2016, while the table chart displays the percentage of fluctuation in values of each category during the period.
Overall, the most profitable item was petroleum but the growth of value was relatively lower than other items. By contrast, textiles mad the smallest money but the value increased significantly.
Regarding the year 2015, the country earned approximately 60 billion dollars (다른데에도 다 넣어주시면 됩니다.) by exporting petroleum and obtained 3 per cent more in the next year. Following that, Engineered engineered goods were sold nearly 57 billion in 2015, by the next year, the goods gained 61 billion, which is a quite ㅁ noticeable improvement in value during the span. Next, Gems gems and jewellery were taken in the third most money-making items. However, in 2016, the profit decreased by 42 billion to almost 40 billion, while the percentage went down by 5.18 per cent. (<----이게 유일한 감소라고 말씀해주시면 됩니다.) In agricultural products, the products earned 31 billion in 2015 and the amount of money it had been made was roughly similar in 2016. For the last, the textiles were made approximately 26 billion and were grew up to 31 billion by exporting. Moreover, the value went up by (task1에서 to와 by는 천지차이입니다.) to 15.24 per cent, which is the most remarkable change among the five categories.
목표 점수 : 6.0
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
혹시 aabb님은 7.0 목표인데 키보드 7이 고장나서 6.0으로 적으시는 건 아니겠죠...? 농담으로 드리는 말씀이긴 한데, 그만큼 6.0은 무조건 받고도 남으실 실력을 갖추고 계시니까 편하게 공부하셔도 됩니다. 6.5냐 7.0이냐의 문제이지, 6.0은 무조건 받으실 수 있어요.
수고하셨습니다 :)