▶ Your Answer :
The two bar graphs
compare where the destinations of graduates and postgraduates in the UK were excluding full-time work after finishing university for the year 2008.
Overall, the majority
of graduate students in the UK went to postgraduate programmes while most of
postgraduate students started further studies or part-time work after finishing
their study in 2008.
According to the first
bar graph, further study was by far the greatest number of what graduates did after
leaving the university. Almost 30,000 students decided to study more. This
contrasts to the students who decided to do volunteer activities as it was the
lowest number at 3,500. The number of students who started part-time jobs and
did not find employment were similar, with figures at 1,500 gaps at 17,735 and
6,235 respectively.
However, most post
graduate students excluding who started full-time work decided to start further
studies and part-time work at similar numbers, with figures at 2,725 and 2,535
respectively. The least people started community work at 345. It is interesting
to note that the whole populations of graduates are ten times higher than postgraduate
students.
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