Q
Many governments think that economic
progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other
types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your
opinion.
A.
The majority of the governments say
economic growth is the most critical goal. On the other hand, the Meanwhile, (이렇게 쓰면 other의 불필요한 반복을 막을 수 있습니다.) other people
say not only economic but also other types of progress is also important. This essay
will discuss both point of views and my opinion as well.
There is no doubt that economy is
significantly important. One of the reasons is that economy can be lead to
everything. For instance, if economy shows a downward trend, as one’s income declines,
a lot number of people will hardly spend money. In short, the circulation of the
money will decrease and it will have be an adverse effect on various markets.
However, it could be cautious to claim that
the most important goal for a country is economic progress. Because, there are
tons of (어느정도 구어에 해당하기 때문에 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다.) progress that we have to take care of. One of those is medical progress.
Due to COVID19, we are having a hard time. If we had proper cautions for the
virus, it would have been much better than now. For example, if we knew about
the virus because of the enough medical technology, things would have will be changed a
lot.
To conclude, actually, almost everything is
crucial for the countries. In order to be a better society, we have to pay
attention to many aspects in the world. If we do not, we will be going through
hard times like now.
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