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Sophie Buhai is a LA based brand and communicates with the local community as a local artist. The shape of the jewelry is also sculptural, yet simple, and restrained in an organic form from nature.
In this showroom, a part of nature permeates the space, creating a space that has elements similar to the natural environment of LA. The windows in various places play a role to draw natural light into the interior. In addition, It it is intended to bring to the space a formative element to the space (굳이 어순을 꼬을 필요는 없습니다.), a huge characteristic of Sophie Buhai. Through this, the space itself became an extension of the jewelry, allowing people to feel another jewelry.
The first floor has distinct four different displays, a water hall, and a garden in the back. An egg-shaped pond is placed in the center of the water hall to give freedom of movement and people descend the stairs along the shape.
The pond is an important element showing the natural environment by showing its wave and reflection. It reacts to (여기는 the가 들어가는 게 조금 더 좋긴 한데, 빠져도 크게 상관은 없습니다.) changing weather and temperature. Passing by the water hall, a snail shaped sculptor, which she draws a huge inspiration from, hangs symbolically in front. Through the display stands of various shapes that wrap around the egg-shaped space, people have their own movement lines. The ceiling is also rounded to match the overall concept.
The space that displays the <Permanent Collection> gives a balanced (이거는 의도에 따라 balance도 가능하긴 해서, 다은님께서 의도하신 바에 맞춰주시면 됩니다.) and a static feeling. The image of the water hall can be seen through the mirror and it shows a variety of appearances, such as making the jewelry look cold or warm. Also, by arranging pieces of organic shape around, the balance of the space was adjusted.
<Signature Collection> is jewelry designs (여기는 is a jewelry design that emphasizes the~로 가는 게 맞아보이는데, 괄호 안에 있는 게 정확히 뭔지는 몰라서 일단 두겠습니다. 이 역시 다은님께서 잘 판단해주시면 충분할 거에요.) that emphasize the egg shape. Through shelves with different heights of each angle, it gives an image of dialogue between egg-shaped objects and jewelry.
<New Collection> actively uses lapis color to make it more prominent in the space where colors are restricted. It is displayed in the form of a round staircase using lapis-colored stones.
Finally, the <Pearl Collection> was directed to create a pure and natural atmosphere. Overall, refined colors are used and displayed to focus on the pearl jewelry itself.
When people go up to the second floor, they gain a lively and comfortable feeling, in contrast contrasting with the simple and refined atmosphere on the first floor. Also, through the egg-shaped void, the lower floor is overlooked, and the brand's image is further deepened through it. The ceiling also has a skylight of the same shape, and light enters through it.
<Hair and Baby Collection> shows more bold colors by using red, yellow, and patterns. The shelves are designed to try by changing the shape and height.
<Private Customer Room> made the brand’s identity more visible. Wood furniture and subtle colors are used to create a natural and comfortable atmosphere.
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