6.5
2. 다음 시험 날짜, 그리고 위의 점수를 아무리 늦어도 언제까지는 만들어야 하는지
시험본적 없음, 늦어도 21년 2~3월
3. 현재 글을 쓰는데에 몇 분이 걸렸는지+단어 수+외부 도움(모범답안 필사) 등이 있었는지의 여부
42분, 302단어
4. 그 외 제가 알아두면 도움될만한 기타 정보나 현재 학생 여러분들의 공부 상황 등
독학중입니다. 라이팅 1,2 한달정도 목표로 템플릿 및 빈출어휘에 집중하려고 합니다.
It is generally believed that people are becoming increasingly rely on computer-based technology. I do not think it will change in the future. However, I think that depending too much on computers is absolutely not good.
Modern society and technology are becoming more and more dependent on computer-based technology. Because these technologies are very useful not only for simple calculating but also for solving complicated problems that are closely related to our life. For instance, nowadays by using computers or smartphones, we are able to handle a lot of things including mobile banking, virtual diagnosis, online bill payment and so on. Thankfully, the development of technology has been enriching daily life. In my opinion, as long as people are very aware of the convenience of computer-based technology, they will keep using it and in the future, better technologies will welcome us.
However, relying too much on computers could cause a lot of serious social issues. Actually, it has already been taking place in terms of human rights. For example, although nobody meant this, many people have experienced the exposure of their personal information and revenge pornos are also one of the big issues all over the world and these kinds of encroachment aimed at unspecified individuals on the internet are occurring by faceless someone. To prevent people from these types of crime, proper laws which are related to the online abusing have to be constituted by national power.
In conclusion. well-developed computer technologies are very useful in present-day life, moreover our future life. However, it would be dangerous in terms of personal information that we rely so much on computers.