The chart gives information about what
kinds of online activities the British did used in 2018. Overall, there were only two
cases that the two cases that the response rate was less than 50%. On the other
hand, the rate of the other seven activities were more than at least 50%.
The figures of playing games and selling
goods was quite small compared to other activities. First of all, the lowest
share of respondents was selling goods and services, which was approximately
25%. The percentage of playing or downloading games was slightly higher than
30%, which was the second from the last place.
The activity that people in the UK most
performed was sending / receiving emails, which it was accounted for more than 80%. It
was followed by researching what they want such as services, goods, which was
slightly lower than 80%. The figures of online banking and social networking
were quite similar, approximately 68%, 65% respectively. more More than half of the total respondents said they used online for watching not only catch-up TV but also
video content (55%, 62%).
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