The given flow chart illustrates the process of manufacturing the instant noodles.
Overall, it is clear that there are eight distinct stages, from storing the flour to labelling leading and sealing a package, which produces the instant noodles.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that in the first stage, the flour is stored in the storage silos. Then, the flour is mixed with the water and oil, and this mixtures are put into the rollers. this This is made into become dough sheets and is separated into some dough strips. Following this, the noodles are become discs, and these are cooked with boiled oil and then dried. After that, the cooked noodles are put into the cups with the vegetables and spicy sources. In the final stage, the cups are labelled and sealed, and by then, finished the process of instant noodles is finished which is finished the instant noodles.
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