걸린시간 : 14분
The chart below shows the changes
that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to
2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart indicates the information on the changing crime
rates in Panama City divided into three parts: burglary, car theft, and
robbery, over the ten years. The calibration of data is done in a number.
(제가 해드린 것처럼, 문단을 구분할 때에는 엔터키를 두 번 쳐주시면 됩니다.)
Overall, it is evident that one segment (그게 뭔지를 적어주시면 됩니다.) incredibly
fluctuated, particularly between 2011 and 2015. In contrast, other segments
were relatively stable.
In more detail, the crime rates of burglary peaked at
approximately 3,500 (숫자가 네 자리를 넘어가는 경우에는 이런 식으로 쉼표를 넣어주셔야 합니다. 심지어 지금처럼 표에 쉼표가 없는 경우에도요. 이것도 엄연한 문법의 일종입니다.), which is the highest rate among those of any segments. However, it
seemed to show a downward trend since 2011. Moreover, it went exponentially
down between 2013 and 2015. After all, its number of incidents hit about 1000
in 2015, which is three times lower than its highest rate. At the same time,
although the rates of car theft also decreased by 1000, it was enough to overtake
the first place. Robbery has had some shifts over the ten years, but its number always
hit a low.
총평: (6/7/7/7) 7.0
빨간 부분이 그렇게 많지는 않을 것을 통해 볼 수 있듯이, 그렇게 크게 문제가 되는 건 없었습니다. 위에 체크된 엔터키 두 번과 쉼표 등에만 조금 주의해주시면 될 것 같아요.
수고하셨습니다 :)