Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that one's private information should be guaranteed no matter what the situation is.
However, I believe that it should be provided to the public when it comes to highly dangerous criminal's information.
On the other hand, there are still many arguments allowing information available is not a favourable way in our modern society even though one's big crime.
Our globe had been evolved and progressed based on the spirit of democracy, which respects each of personal opinions or rights toward freedom and it remains as one of our top priority.
Take the example of one interview of the leader who cares ex-criminals in a small town, he states that "If one's criminal history was opened to the public, they would not even dream to restart something. While crime can never be justified, I believe giving them a chance to live a new life is one of our responsibilities as a human being living in 21st-century."
Even so, I still firmly believe that information of criminal who made a seriously big crime must be provided to the citizen for many safety and security reasons.
Today, more and more crimes are happening in the globe such as terrorism or sexual assault.
If we are unaware of a criminal's private information, nobody would feel free of hazards.
One of the terrible rapists in history of Korea has been planned to be released in near future.
Many campaigns are rising in various regions objecting release him.
But it still being obscure how to deal with this issue.
To sum up, while it is evident that personal rights of freedom should be provided to everyone, it is undeniable that protecting our society, children and family is much more imperative than anything.
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