The given table shows the
amount of economic value of foreign students in the US in five years term from
2005 to 2015, while the bar graph illustrates the number of international
students from three Asian countries in 2005 and 2015. In general, the constant increase
of economic value of international students in the US can be described by the
growing number of students from Asian countries including China which showed
the steep surge on its figure.
To be specific, the
contribution of international students to the US’s economy of the US was around 10
billion dollars in the year of 2005. (2010년도 그냥 언급해주시면 됩니다.) However, it became more than triple after
10 years at 35.8 billion dollars. When it comes to the number of students from
Asia in the US, the number of students from given three countries went up in
the same period. Especially, China showed a surprising surge from 30 thousand to
330 thousand students. The India, which was the biggest student export country
in 2005 also doubled its number within 10 years. Meanwhile, South Korean
students in the US only showed a small increase from 90 thousand to 110 thousand.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
군데군데 자잘한 사항들이 있긴 했지만, 그래도 이정도면 아주 잘 적어주신 편입니다. 물론 표가 쉬웠던 영향도 어느정도 있겠지만, 그래도 영어 실력 자체, 즉 어휘문법이 단단한만큼 표에 관계없이 어느정도 좋은 점수를 기대할 수 있을 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)