저번 셀핍 시험때도 도움을 많이 주셨는데 스피킹때문에 다시 시험을 치게되었습니다ㅠㅠ
소요시간은 30분입니다. 항상 레벨 8인데... 이번에는 9 받고 싶어요. 2주뒤에 시험칩니다.
You live in a small city. City administration is planning to
allocate funds for two possible projects.
Option A: planning to build new separate lanes for bikers
Option B: Renovate gym to add a swimming pool and spa centre
in an existing gym
Write about 150-200 words.
Some people insist that new bike lanes would be beneficial to
our town. However, in my opinion, community gym renovation should be done first renovation should first be done to the community gym (이런 식으로 msg를 쳐야 레벨9에 더 가까워질 수 있습니다.) before we consider new bike lanes. There are some reasons why I think so.
First of all, new bike lanes are beneficial only to cyclers bikers only. When we need to choose a project among two options for our city,
we should work first on one that affects more people than the other one. The
number of people who are using the gym is definitely higher than that of people
who bike in the city.
Secondly, our current swimming pool is too small to accommodate
an increasing number of requests for swimming classes. Especially, some parents
are taking their children to a bigger town for a swimming class every weekend.
Lastly, a new spa centre would add a new option for leisure
time for citizens. People would love to go to the spa centre to reduce their
stress and anxiety and ease their tired muscles after work.
With the reasons explained above, I am in favor of
renovating our existing gym, compared to building new lanes for bikes. This project will be more helpful to improve citizen’s
quality of life.
총평: 율님 오랜만에 오셨네요! 제가 셀핍 전문은 아니긴 하지만, 현 글 정도만 유지해도 레벨 8은 충분히 괜찮을 겁니다. 대신 제가 서론에 적어드린 것처럼 조금 더 깔끔하게/매끄럽게 바꿀 수 있어야 그 이상도 노려볼 수 있을 것이고요. 파이팅입니다!
수고하셨습니다 :)