The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems
are serious in on modern society. Many experts said that it is a result of
developing the world indiscriminately. Then, many people try to live simply for the environment. There are some methods such as walking around
without a car and using an ecobag instead of a plastic bag, for simpler way of life live. However, I think it is impossible that everyone all people of the current
generation accept to live simply and it is not the best way to solve
environmental problems. The reasons will discussed in this essay.
First of all, people will feel uncomfortable if
they decide to live simply. They have to give up many things they like and what
makes them comfortable. Someone is Even if some people would be willing to give up for the environment and the next generation, others would but someone does
not want to abandon their things. Some people might think that it has no effect
on the earth (여기는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) even if they change their life style environment-friendly. Thus, a
simpler way of life is no matter whether it can solve environmental problems. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) In reality, it is not an impossible solution.
Also, current environmental problems are so serious that it cannot be solved by individuals alone. Many companies emit a lot of green gas from plants and use various chemical materials which are fatal to nature. The amount from companies cannot be compared to that from individuals. Therefore, people use products of those companies and these products have a bad influence on the environment. Thus, regulations about companies and their products are needed and companies should try to make products good for the earth.
In conclusion, rather than individuals’ life style, plants that emit many bad materials should change for the sake for the next generation because they have much more influence on environment.
overall ; 7.0
총평: (7/7/7/6) 7.0
아슬아슬하긴 7점이긴 하지만, 6.5는 충분히 받을 겁니다. Earth 관련해서만 밑의 사항을 참고해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)
오늘은 'Earth' 의 대소문자 관해서 다뤄볼 겁니다.
Earth 는 고유명사가 될 수도, 보통명사가 될 수도 있습니다. 이때, 경우에 따라 전자는 대문자 시작, 후자는 소문자 시작해주셔야하고요.
Earth 가 태양계의 세 번째 행성인 '지구' 를 의미할 때에는 대문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 가령, Looking at our planet Earth from outer space was an unforgettable experience. 라는 문장에서는 지구라는 의미로 작성되었으므로 대문자로 시작하는 것이죠.
반면 대지, 땅에 대해서 얘기할 때에는 소문자 시작입니다. 예를 들어, By digging the earth for about an hour, we were finally able to find the treasure. 라는 문장에서는 땅이라는 의미로 쓰였기 때문에 소문자 시작인 것이죠.
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