Your Answer ▼ Many people say (이거는 그냥 외우시면 됩니다. 저 밑에도 다 바꿔주시면 돼요.) said that the education from their own family is more important than the ?? These days, many people discuss about two types of education, one from their own family and another from school. Some people said the former is more important than the latter, and the others said the opposite. Personally speaking, both are important in our life, but I would say that the education from family is more important, if I have to choose. In terms of the family education, first reason for importance is this type of education influences on human personality. In some researches, children's personality is formed when they become four years old was made in four years when they were a baby. Therefore, the family education is so important at that time which never came back. Another reason is the family education can make many good habits, because we can learn good habits from normal daily life. In daily life, parents can teach eating habits and we can learn about various habits of social relation through brothers and sisters. On the other hand, in terms of the school education, the most important thing is academic features. For example, if someone wants to learn deeply about science, he may find teachers or professors, not your parents, and learn from them. That's why most people learn academic education from school. (의식하셨겠지만, 이 문단 훨씬 더 쓰셔야 합니다. 서론에서 쓸데없이 시간+분량 낭비하지 마시고 본론에 집중해주세요!0 In conclusion, I think there are different reasons for this two types of educations. the The family education is more important than the school education because human personality and good habits are more important than academic knowledge.
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