Some people think
that universities should spend money to improve the food at university cafeterias. Others think that the money in universities should be spent on their
students’ social activities. This topic is an
intriguing question because opinions concerning this topic can be different
relying individual perspectives. In my opinion, however, universities should invest in social activities for the
following reasons.
To begin with, it
is better for students to attend social activities because it helps a person to
socialize with diverse people. Improving relationships
with many individuals is very important, positive and has
long lasting implications for person’s development. Those who have close
and supportive bonds with diverse people will
achieve more in their life. This is because many people choose to hire or work
with the person they know. Because of this
tendency, students are likely to improve social activities. However, meeting
diverse people in a cafeterias is limited because people who are in this
area usually eat food. (굳이 이 문장은 안 넣으셔도 됩니다. 오히려 이 문장으로 인해
흐름이 이상해졌습니다.) For
example, Jintack, who was one of my friends
during college year, works as a manager at Samsung. He has been sending me e-mails with new job openings before he posts them it on
official sites. As a result, I can prepare for an interview
in advance or check new information.
Second, attending
social activities enables students to relieve stress. In Through social activities,
people can share many opinions in the same
interest. As a result, people in this atmosphere are likely to relieve stress.
Also, students today students are dealing
with excessive pressure which comes from many
studies to get higher GPA. Therefore, it is necessary to decrease this
pressure. However, because the aim of the cafeteria is
to give students meals, students are not
likely to reduce stress. (마찬가지로 갑자기 내용에 어울리지 않는 문장입니다. 또한 맛있는
음식을 섭취하면 스트레스가 풀리지 않을까요?) For example, when I was in university, I
participated in a soccer club where there are
were a lot of people. In this soccer club, I
could share about many soccer skills, and getting new skills make made me feel better. From this reason, I could fully
relieve stress, got and get back to study
as well.