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It is a common belief that people have too many choices to choose from we have already had choices as many as we can not choose. However, I firmly disagree with this opinion that we have a lot of choices. We need to make more diversity of People need to make more diverse choices because of expression of personalities.
On the one hand, a myriad of choices make people spend much time and money to choose, although they are only slight differences that are not essential part, but about one's preference such as colours. In addition, having a lot of choices makes people take mistakes when they should determine something important. For example, most of companies who design and produce something have a strategy that making their product include more choices. That is the way companies make customers spend much money than they plan by confusing them with what is important.
Nevertheless, I firmly believe that we need more choices are needed/necessary (이런 식으로 수정하면 일인칭 사용을 피할 수 있습니다.) because there not enough choices to express our people's own personalities. In modern society, people think every choice they determine is the way to show who they are and what they pursue. (이유는 이게 아니라, 예를 들면 '몇몇 대기업의 독점에 따른 선택지 부족이 되어야 합니다. 스마트폰으로 따지면 갤럭시와 아이폰 등이죠.) That is the reason why people feel a lack of choices. In fact, many interviews and surveys dealing with the young show that they make effort to express their individualities, though it takes much time and money. They think expression of personalities is more important than any other things. In addition, intriguingly, they argue that a lack of choices makes them spend much time because they hesitate to choose among something that are not enough.
To sum up, it is evident that we do not have a lot of choices to worry about. (여기도 1인칭이 사용되지 않도록 수정해주세요.) In contrast, we should make more choices to help people express their personalities easier. ('제언' 을 할 필요는 없습니다. 해서도 안 되고요.) |