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Some people might claim that focusing on developing one particular skill is the fastest way to succeed. However, in my opinion, societies have changed and now we people are required to be more versatile to be successful because if we only have one people only have a single skill, there is a chance that that the particular skill might become obsolete in the future. Also, there are more diverse ways to earn a living if we have many skills are in hand (단순히 people 주어를 사용하는 것 외에도 지금과 같은 방식으로 1인칭이 사용되는 것을 피할 수 있으므로, 제가 밑에서는 1인칭이 꼭 필요한 경우에만 파란색으로 표시해드리겠습니다. 나머지는 다 1인칭이 사용되지 않도록 한번 바꿔보세요~). Firstly, only having a one single ability increases the chance of being put out of work if that skill is no longer needed. Nowadays, there is a growing concern that artificial intelligence will replace most of the workers in the foreseeable future. For example, a similar phenomenon has already occurred when Industrial Revolution took place. At that time, lots of factory workers lost their jobs because they were displaced by machinery. If we only rely on one skill as a means to achieve success, there is a risk of losing our careers when A.I. can do better at that job than humans, which obviously means that our chance at being successful will become highly improbable. Secondly, if you own many different talents, you can diversify your source of income, which is likely to lead you to success more quickly. (1인칭 사용 관련해서는 내 의견임을 직접적으로 드러낼 때 사용 가능하다는 예외가 있지만, 2인칭의 경우 이유불문 사용해서는 안 됩니다.) These days, it is common for people to have two or even three jobs. People in modern times have many interests and hobbies and sometimes, they become successful in the least expected way. For instance, there is a YouTuber youtuber named Joe. He was a barista in Australia and he started out uploading videos on YouTube youtube just for fun. However, his contents became overwhelmingly popular and after only 6 months, he began to make more than 11,000 US dollars per month. This case proves that being skillful in more than one area increases your chance of financial success. (여기도 2인칭이 사용되지 않도록 해주시고, 또한 지금 들어주신 사례가 다양한 재능/능력과 어떤 식으로 연관이 되는지 파악할 수가 없습니다. 그러므로 이러한 연관성을 조금 더 구체적으로 보여주세요.) To summarize, it is important to have more than one skill because you can avoid the danger of being unemployed if your skill falls out of use and you can find various ways to make money. For these reasons, I (여기 빼고 1인칭은 다 바꿔주시면 됩니다.) believe that all of us should make tremendous efforts to be adept at many tasks to be more successful.
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