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This bar graph shows the number of social
networking sites used (number 와는 아무런 상관이 없고, 비율 수치이죠. 지금과 같은 잘못된 설명은 총점으로 최소 0.5점, TR 영역에서 1점 이상 감점될 만큼 큰 사항입니다.) by Canadians in the year 2014 and 2015.
In general, it can be seen from the graph
that the proportion of people using more than one site increased, whereas fewer
people spent time on one social networking site over the period in question. (이건 표를 통해 알 수 없는 사항입니다. 표는 비율 수치만 보여주고 있기 때문이죠.)
In detail, people who had not visited any site made
up just over one fifth of the total population analyzed in 2014, declining by
1% (percent 수치 간 산술적인 차이는 percentage point 를 이용해서 표현해주셔야 합니다.) in the following year. The highest proportion of people used only one site
in both years but showed a sharp fall from 36% in 2014 to 28% in 2015. In
contrast, people chose to use multiple websites, which result in slight growths
in such categories as two sites, three sites, four sites and five sites. (여기도 마찬가지로, 표를 통해 알 수 없는 사항입니다. 절대적인 숫자와 상대적인 비율은 꼭 구분해주세요.) Compared
to the 2014 figures, they experienced 1%, 4%, 3% and 2% (여기도 percentage point 의 사용이 필요하고요.) rises respectively.
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