* 참고
1) 목표 시험점수: 최소 6.5
2) 시간재고 외부 도움 없이 쓴 글이고, 아이엘츠는 한번도 쳐본 적이 없어요.
Q) Some people believe that the development of artificial intelligence will make human labour obsolete. Others think that work performed by humans will always be important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, there are divergent opinions about the use of artificial intelligence. Many people think that artificial intelligence can replace what human beings do, while people with different view strongly disagree with this idea, saying that human labour will not be obsolete. Based on this, I personally believe that work performed by people will always be significant in terms of processes in life.
On the one hand, some people say that human working will lose its importance as the technology of artificial intelligence develops because the A.I. can judge clearer than human beings. This is due to the fact that people’s emotion will absolutely interfere on deciding some issues, in contrast, the A.I. technology can decide without any interference of emotion because it is a system. In particular, occupations that requires high proficiency of accuracy and objectiveness such as judge, doctor, and factory worker will be easily replaced by the A.I.
On the other hand, there are people who think that work performed by human is still needed in the future society. This is because that it is not always priority to judge according to a rule subjectively. Sometimes, understanding one’s situation deeply and affective communicating are more importance because humans basically need other’s empathy. For instance, the importance of human teachers will not be changed in the future. Even if there are A.I. teachers which can teach very effectively, they would not understand each student’s feeling and emotion based on learner’s backgrounds and features. Only human teachers can provide deeper communication by imagining learner’s feelings and characters.
In conclusion, it is contentious that whether the development of artificial intelligence would replace human work performances or not. That is because both artificial intelligence and human being have their own advantages and shortages. However, I personally believe that human beings work will keep its own meaning in the future society.