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It is a common belief that regular subjects like mathematics and languages are quite influential for learners when studying in school. However, I firmly believe that students had better to acquire vocational knowledge as it is more useful and attractive in the future.
To begin with, pursuing vocational careers such as baking is more practical to succeed and adapt in the contemporary society rapidly. This educational curriculum enables students to look for helpful occupations what they are able to make use of earning much money by the age of over 70. To support this idea, the Australian government has funded for vocational education by not only constructing TAFE schools in each state but providing a variety of abilities like carpeting in order for teenagers to find better professions as early as possible. Similarly, Korea has built up Meister schools, which institutions emphasise on delving into specialised skills such as computer skills and bio technology.
On top of that, compared to regular school systems, this can allow learners to take part in vocational programmes actively as various hands-on activities including apprenticeship courses makes them interesting. As a good example of this, primary school students in Korea including me tend to engage in practical courses incorporating cooking and knitting as they believe time flew quickly unlike History and English as well as learn sustainable knowledge.
To sum up, more energetic participation tendency and its practical features make vocational careers become better. For these reasons, a lot of students should learn vocational knowledge as soon as possible. (254 words, 42 minutes)
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