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The given table describes how much proportion a corporation in the Europe not only cost on advertisement but generated revenues of five distinct goods sold in 2004.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is obvious that this company mostly made advertisement expenses and entire profits on selling Computers, Air conditioners and Televisions., while fridges and washing machines were less sold in 2004.
Looking at the table more closely, one can see that Televisions had the highest share of advertising costs, reaching approximately two-fifth of the total, followed by Air conditioners at 36.6%. Following this, the percentage of Computers was just below one-third of that of air conditioners, although a company spent more computers advertisement than refrigerators and washing machines combined. In contrast, they made profits the most from selling computers, making up roughly 43%. Then, the proportions of air conditioners and televisions accounted for 23.7% and 16,4% at each. Lastly, there were smaller portions of revenues from selling other electronics incorporating Refrigerators and Washing machines, hitting a low of around both 8%. (19 minutes, 174 words)
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