The given bar chart illustrates information on the percentage of regular physical activity of
Australian men and women according to certain age group in 2010.
Overall, between 15 to 24 age group do the most physical activity regularly among Australian male
whereas, the female age group between 45 to 54 depict the highest figure over the given period,
In case of Australian male, the percentage of 52.8% recorded in the age group 15 to 24 which was the highest. Decrease by 10.6% points in the following age group and then. The figure of male continued to drop to hit its lowest percentage of 39.5% in the age group 35 to 44. Interestingly,the rate of male experienced slight increase as he final age group,65 and over, reach to 46.7%.
Meanwhile, in female charts, the figure of 15 to 24 made up merely 47.7%. On the other hand with
that of male, the female figure gradually rose. The age group which did the most regular physical
activity of female was 45 to 54 as at 53.3%. From the next age group showed a decrease slightly.
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