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It is debatable whether the government should not fund space travel or space exploration. This is an intriguing question because opinions concerning this topic can be different relying on individual perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that government must invest money on to the space travel or space exploration.
First of all, searching for the space would be developed develop national economy. To be specific, in universe, there are many resources which are not found yet (What are they?) and many nations have interested in developing an excavation technique for resources extraction in other planets the skills like reaching at mars or bringing the space’s resources. So if the government invent it that skills, they can earn money by selling the resources or skills to another countries still not have techniques. For example, In Russia which is the most famous in the universe area, (What does it mean?) they found the natural resources which can be converted into source of that were enable to energy at first. Not only that, but they have techniques that make the spaceships. As a result, universe exploration area has contributed most to the economic y development of Russia.
Secondly, people need to new places to that will live in. These days, environment is a very serious problem (Environment itself is not a issue) and it has been worse. continuing this process, people will no longer live on earth anymore. (Continue what process?) As such a way to remain human being, people have to explore how to habit in space. For example, in the University, I've learned in university that about 1000 years later, there are no lives in the earth even marine lives and bacterias. because global warming will become much more and more severer. So the researches investing the planets like mars are processing actively. Unless the government investigate encourage the space exploration, humans are will disappear disappeared.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the government should spend the money for universe travel or universe experiments. All things considered, it is my belief that this issue has been efficiently and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our future.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 1 | 2
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- 다른 행성에서 발견할 수 있는 resource의 예를 들어주세요.
- 정확한 어법과 단어사용에 익숙해지셔야 합니다. universe area 역시 aerospace fields를 말하고 있는 것으로 보입니다. - disappear는 자동사 이므로 수동태로 쓰이지 않습니다. - 환경자체로는 문제가 되지 않습니다. 환경 오염이 주 원인일 것으로 보입니다.
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