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Some people might say that working by hand is better than working by machine while others do not think this way. If I have to choose one among two different opinions, I would say that it is much better to carry out something with machine. There are a couple of reasons and examples as follows.
To begin with, working by machine helps people save a lot of time, which is significantly efficient. As everyone has already known, mass production could be possible by creating many kinds of machines and using them in the process of production. It made it possible to make a lot of products in a short time, which resulted in the lower price of them. Eventually, this contributed to today's market. For instance, John Park who is a outstanding economist around the world said in his book, Capitalistic Economy, that intoducing the introduction of machine led to the most noticeable change of the form of market. He added that machine helped producers to make more products with less effort and time. As a result, consumers could meet a lot of diverse merchandises in markets and this loop got the markets bigger and at the same time made capitalism stronger.
On top of that, people can work accurately if they take advantage of machine. In the case that people work only by hand, it is more likely to make a lot of errors, which can have a negative impact on their productivity. However, machine can process(처리하다) (or manage) a lot of tasks precisely and quickly. I will take my personal experience to illustrate my opinion. I remembered when I took an english exam in a middle school. I thought that I could get a good grade from my exam as I studied hard. However, I got a worst grade in my class and I was wondering how it happended. I found out that it resulted from a fault made by my english teacher. Similar situations occured frequently since every teachers marked exams individually. Going to a high school, I did not have problems with my reporting anymore because my school introduced a newly machine to mark exams.
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