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In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that genetically modified crops are beneficial for human. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. The lecturer claims that the impacts of genetically modified crops are too exaggerated. To begin with, the lecturer contends that it is unrealistic way that genetically modified crops can solve the problem of world hunger. What he means is that, More important problem that we have to pay attention is an unequal distribution of food. Even if there are more yields by genetically modified crops, a lot of population still cannot access food. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that genetically modified crops have positive impacts on the amount of crops by enhancing crop yields. In addition, the lecturer maintains that genetically modified crops are unlikely to make the price of food cheaper. The professor describes that the price of the food will be more expensive rather because the agriculture companies expect their compensation for investing. Additionally, genetically modified crops require more water to grow up. This counters the reading passage's assertion that genetically modified crops are greatly helpful for decreasing food price because they enable plants to endure harsh environments. Lastly, the lecturer points out that the new vaccines of genetically modified crops are not different from that of traditional one. In other words, they have similar problems with conventional ones. They use tomatoes and bananas which can be spoiled very quickly, meaning that they are hard to be stored and carried. This refutes the reading passage's claim that the vaccines that are made later are more effective than former ones since they are easy to be saved and shipped.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- 수동태 사용 주의해주세요. - 주어가 불분명할 경우 대명사가 아닌 구체적인 이름을 명시해주세요. - 축약형이 아닌 전체 이름을 (genetically modified crops) 작성해주세요.
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