▶ Topic :
4.
The reading passage provides several
evidences that the subsidy for Amtrak is unnecessary and should be replaced by privatizing
or abolition for the fund because it is too outdated. However, the professor
in the lecture refutes the author’s claim and points out that the subsidy has a
huge potential.
First of all, the federal subsidy
aligns with the purpose of federal government’s job. In other word, it provides
great connection with rural and urban areas. This nation-wide network facilitates a
mass of positive effects. Hence, it is both proper and legitimate. This
counters the author’s argument that the grant could be used on other field of
market which could be more workable, privatizing the
organization at the same time.
Second, the lecturer argues that the premise of the
reading passage is wrong. Other types of transportation organization also receive
similar amount of grants from the federal government. Although the money is
indirect, the government provides indirect subsidy, such as road pavement and
other infrastructures which are necessary. Regarding to these facts, subsidy does
not lead Amtrak overly dependent on the funding. This rebuts the assertion of
the reading passage that subsidy on Amtrak diminishes its competitiveness in
the free market by not providing effective incentives.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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