TOPIC 2: honesty is important when choosing a learder of student organisation. Agree or disagree?
I do not think that honest is important when choosing a leader.
First, one of the most significant skills that leaders must have is to be a "good listener". Leaders are often chosen to convey all the student's message and to enhance collaboration. Being honest is less important for a leader.
Second, leaders must be a skilled decision makers. Leader, as representative of a group, is an important figure in making decisions so that their members are satisfied. Being honest is less important than being determined and decisive.
The reasons stated above explains my opion to the given statement.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- TOPIC 3: People work hard due to high salary, not because of public recognition.
First, people are more likely to get stressed out when they are poor. Therefore, people first aim for financial stability then for public recognition, and not the other way around. This is why having high income is one's first priority and the reason for working hard.
Second, due to economic problems, it has become very difficult to find a high salary jobs. Because of this, people now work hard for high salary and public recognition has become less important than before.
The reasons stated above explains my opinion to the statement.
내용 봐주실수 있으신가요? 한꺼번에 많이 올려서 짧게 썼어요. 열심히 생각하면서 작성했으니, 채점 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다.
Topic 1 -첫번째 이유에서, 세상이 '어떻게' 변해서 과거와 다르게 어떤 모습인지, 그것이 부모가 자녀를 이해하는 데에 어떤 영향을 끼쳤는지 더 구체적으로 설명해주세요. -두번째 이유는 괜찮습니다.
Topic 2 -첫문장에서 that절에서 that 뒤에 주어+동사 나와야하는데 honest자리가 주어 자리이므로 명사형으로 써주세요. 따라서, honesty 혹은 being honest로 써주세요. -이유는 두가지 다 괜찮습니다.
Topic 3 -두번째 이유에서 economic problems를 조금만 더 자세히 설명해주세요. 나라의 경제상황/세계의 경제상황과 그 영향에 대해서. -이유들은 둘다 괜찮습니다.
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