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Some people think that it is better to wait
until they come up with a perfect idea for a presentation to start with. However, in my
opinion, people should start working on the presentation right away when it is
assigned. This is because students can have more time to prepare and also have more
chance to learn about the topic and gain opportunities to come up with great
ideas. (주제에 사용된 단어를 그대로 사용하는 것을 지양해주시고 paraphrase/동의어 사용해주세요)
First of all, start working on presentation
immediately after it is assigned gives students more time to prepare for their assignment. Many
students have a lot of things to do and do not have enough time to do those
things. When students could not (couldn't --> could not 처럼 full version을 작성해주세요) spend sufficient time for their assignments,
result will be less successful. For example, one of my friends who took an engineering
course with me had to finish the assignment about efficient electricity
generator in three weeks. He thought that he will have enough time to finish it
and did not started right away. A week later, he got another project from the other
class and had to work on that for few days. After finishing the project, he did not have a time to complete the presentation and eventually got a bad grade. Even
though it was a major presentation that he had to do well for his final grade,
the result was not good.
Secondly, preparing for the presentation as
soon as it is assigned can help people learn about the topic profoundly and make their ideas
more abundant. When presentation is assigned, students usually do not know
about the topic as well as professors do. While preparing for the assignment,
students learn new fact and build up knowledge. This can lead to more brilliant
ideas that students never thought of. For example, when I got an assignment about
honeybee from my science teacher, I immediately started to work on my
assignment even though I did not have any great idea to build up my project and
make a presentation. While doing basic
researches for the presentation, I found a video that I have never seen it
before. It was about bee’s behavior change which had lots of information about
honeybee that I could learn many facts form it. From this video, I got a
brilliant idea to make my presentation and got a good grade from my teacher who
assigned it.
To sum up, students can use more time to
work on their assignment if they start right away. Also, as I have mentioned
above, wider range of brilliant ideas can come out when students work on their
project earlier. For these reasons, I’d like to say starting to work on their
assignment immediately is better than waiting until perfect idea come up to
their mind.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- 단순히 주제에 대해 공부할 시간이 길어진다는 구조 외에 '미리 공부하고 내용을 충분히 숙지하게 되면서 주제에 더욱 잘 알게 되고 궁극적으로 최고의 perfect answer / idea를 찾을 수 있다' 는 내용으로 이어지면 더욱 좋을 것 같습니다.
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