▶ Your Answer :
An
intriguing topic of discussion at hand is that studying alone is better than a
group study. The answers of this question can greatly vary depending on
individual perspectives. However, as far as I concerned, I prefer to study with
a group of students because it is more efficient than studying alone and I can learn
how to interact with others. In this essay, I explore two main reasons to
support my opinion.
To
begin with, a group study is more efficient than studying alone. This is
because I can save my time and effort by joining a group study. I have one
personal experience about it. When I was senior, I took eight major subjects to
fulfill my credits for my graduation. Because of many subjects, I was not able
to prepare mid-term and final tests alone. However, by joining a study group, I
was able to study all subjects in a short time because each student summarized
each section of a book. Likewise, when I prepared the reports, I could gather
much information due to the help of my group. It can be proved by the research
conducted by the Yale University. They reported that when students studied with
their peers, learning efficiency was eighty percent better than when they
studied alone. In this sense, I prefer to study with my friends because it is
more effective methods for my study.
On
top of that, I prefer to study with a group of students because students can
raise their social skills. To be specific, while studying with their friends,
students can learn how to cooperate with other students and it can be potential
help when they get an occupation after graduation. According to the survey
carried out by Korea National Statistic Office, most companies preferred to
hire a new worker who had been joined in a study group. This is because they
assume that students who study together can know how to cooperative and
interact well with others. This can be proved by another survey conducted by
same agency. It reported that people who studied alone in the university had a
difficulty in adapting their occupations because they were unfamiliar with the
interaction with others. In this manner, I prefer to study together because I
can raise my social skills.
To
sum up, because of these two reasons, I prefer to study a group of students
because it can save my time and my effort and additionally, I can raise my
social skills.
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