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It is often say that using smart devices when students are studying is a coomon thing in our life. There is a controversial issue regarding
whether it is beneficial for students to use smart devices to learn more
effectively or not. After taking into consideration of the idea from several
aspects, personally, I agree with the idea that using smart devices is helpful
for students to learn more effectively for two reasons. The first is students
can save time and money. The second is it is convenient to use smart devices
when students are studying. To
begin with, smart devices have many helpful factors for studying. The reason is
we are able to save time and money, so we can spend time and money more wisely.
For example, I have studied using smart devices. When I was going to high
school, I couldn’t go to academy because there is no academy in my hometown. To
overcome this problem, I watched the Internet lecture using smart pad in
anytime and everywhere easily. If I were not had smart pad, I could not have
studied well, and then I couldn’t go to university. Therefore, it is a good way
to use smart devices when students study.
In
conclusion, I strongly believe that my standpoints of the two opinions are
sufficiently convincing. The first is smart devices make us use time and money
efficiently and using smart devices is convenient. In this regard, I agree with
the idea that students should use smart devices when they study.
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