▶ Your Answer:
Some people say that school
these days can offer a variety of things to students along with education.
However, the most important thing that
students should obtain from school is definitely a quality education. In the
pursuit of this purpose, teachers should be experts in their field for their
students.
First of all, the essential duty
of a teacher is to teach their students in the most effective way. They became teachers to
deliver their knowledge to students so that the
students can do what they want to do in the
future. If students want something else than
learning, (at school such as social activities,) they should go find somewhere that provides such services. (else where can provide that
service professionally outside school.) For example, there is one professor in
my university. (Even though) He is a bit cold to everyone so it is hard for
students to get close to him. However, he is always
well prepared for his lectures and everyone really enjoys his classes and
learns a lot from him. (he has been
researching of the subject so actively that the lectures he offers have very
good quality.) A lot of students around me highly
respect him (as a great researcher) since he can
always answer to all the questions perfectly. (has been able to answer
wonderfully for all the students’ questions.) In this regard, I believe that a
crucial factor of a good teacher is how knowledgeable
he or she is about the subject he or she is teaching. (well equipped
with a knowledge of a subject).
On top of that, there can be
disadvantages (that) when teachers connect with students too much. Since a teacher is a human being as well, it would be
hard for teachers to give the same amount of love and attention to all
students. There must be some students whom they are
more interested in. (attract more
interest of teachers, and others might not.) If a
teacher does not treat his or her students fairly, it could bring serious
problems. (A teacher’s behavior of being partial to students could be a
serious problem.) For instance, when I was in
elementary school, (while I was at elementary school, ) my homeroom teacher specially liked one girl who later turned out to be a daughter of my teacher’s
friend. At that moment, I believed that the reason why I didn’t get enough
attention from the teacher (compared to that
girl) was that I did (must have done)
something wrong at school. However, now I can see it was not true. As young
students tend to be very sensitive, even unintended little act of a teacher can affect students a lot. I’m not
saying that teachers should be a teaching robot. Just being less connected with
students and more professional in the aspect of education would benefit
students more. (definitely.)
If we had been able to learn by
ourselves so well, there would be no need for teachers now. It is obvious that students can learn so much from those
who are specialized in their fields. (teachers can guide students so
that they can learn in the best, most effective way.) (With) For these reasons, I believe that teachers should
become experts on their subjects. (field for
the sake of students.)
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