■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Your Answer :
There is an argument over whether or not grades can
encourage students to learn. Some people believe that students can have more
desire to learn by receiving their grade reports. My view, however, is that
letting students know their grades is not effective that much. This is because
grades can make students who got a bad score feel a sense of despair by ranking
students in order. Moreover, grades cannot encourage students who already do
not want to study.
To begin with, most school provide grades to their students.
The grades are based on the score tested by the examination which is created by
teachers. Teachers usually estimate their students following the grades what
students had. If teachers can deal with their students equally between high-score
students and low-score students, it would be no problem. However, it is easy
for teacher to connect the students with their grades and it will have an
impact on teachers’ behavior. For example, particularly in South Korea, it is a
huge social problem that many students commit suicide themselves for grades. They
feel that they are unnecessary presents because teachers and parents do not
respect them saying that grades are most important in living a life. This social
problem apparently shows that grades discourage students to learn.
On top of that, there are many students who do not want to
study and even do not know why they have to go to school. For these students,
grades are just a piece of paper. They do not care about their scores at all.
Therefore, those students are necessary to know why they should learn before
being evaluated by examinations at a few times. If they know the reasons why
they need to study, they will be able to have a thinking to learn. In my case,
I had a friend, Suzy, who were not interested in studying at all. Sometimes, she
even did not come to school. Therefore, our teacher approached to teach her in
other ways. The teacher gave special assignments in various genres, which is
interesting works not exactly assignments, that make Suzy get interested in
accomplishing something. As a result, Suzy found her interesting in singing and
she entered the renowned music conservatory.
So for these reasons, I do not agree with the statement that
grades can be helpful for students to have a desire to learn. I believe grade
reports have a negative effect on students.
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