■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : It is more important for teachers to connect with students than to be experts in their fields. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that teachers role as a supporter of their students is much more important than that as an experts in their major field. In my opinion, however, the teachers competence and ability are paramount factors to be considered. This is because their leadership is fully dependent to their ability and school reputation is greatly influenced by the teachers who are pertained in the school. First of all, teachers should be a specialist in their specific area. That is, before teaching students, they should be prepared themselves to fulfill their requirement as an advisors and directors. People who are learning from their advisors will not follow and believe them if the advisors are not believable and trustworthy. For example, when I was in high school student, my math teacher was so incompetence in teaching math. Not only his attitude toward the students were so incompetent but also he did not have much intelligence about the math enough to teach us. Needless to say, students started to ignore him and didn't pay a lot of attention in what he was saying. Also the grades of the students who were taught by the teacher were very poor. Students in that time argued that they would have learned much better if the teacher was more eligible. This example shows that the teachers eligibility and competency in their field are indispensable to teach students properly. On top of that, schools reputations are highly dependent on their teachers ability. In particular, college reputation is strictly influenced by professors ability and career. And It is also needless to say that the schools reputations have deep relation to the nation's educational reputation. For example, according to a study carried out in 2012 at national examination institute, U.S colleges of engineering got a highest score in their research due to their tantamount faculty quality. For over several years, U.S government have tried to enhance the quality of faculty in colleges and this efforts lead to the prosperity of the nation in many area. Also South Korea is following nowadays the policy to ascend their educational reputation. This system will require the teachers high ability and competency. U.S and South Korea would not have been able to reach that high position if they did not emphasize on developing the teachers ability. To sum up, focusing on teachers competency is much more important than anything else because students need teachers who are eligible and their ability influence to the schools reputation. In this regard, I think it is more important for teachers to be experts in their area rather than to being close advisors to their students. |
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