▶ Your Answer :
According to the reading, there is ample support for the author's claim that there are many advantages of the wave-energy facilities. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that the fact that wave farms are dependable generators of power is questionable. Since the farms are operating in harsh marine environment, this can cause equipment leads to equipments malfunction. As a result, the amount of energy gathered they made can fluctuate. This counts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that wave farms are thought to be reliable generators of power in that they are constantly operating.
Second, the professor insists that wave-energy facilities are harmful to the environment. To explain, the generators are needed to have a coating by using certain chemical products to operate well. The problem is that this chemical substance have toxin, which can directly and it affects the marine environment. This counters the reading passage's suggestion that wave farms play a great role in being environmentally friendly unlike other fossil fuels.
Finally, the professor argues that it is not true that the facilities have positive ramification on the natural beauty. To be specific, in order to be easily detected by shipping vessels, facilities should be painted with a bright color. This means that they are noticeable and ruin the beauty of the environment. This refutes the reading passage's claim that wave farms have no influence on scenery because they are too small to be noticed compared to the other types of power.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | Score | Fair 19-22 | - 세 가지 논지와 예시들을 잘 잡아주셨어요.
- 표현적인 부분이 다소 아쉬운 부분이 있고, 세 번째 설명부분만 좀 더 다듬어주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
|
|